Rabu, 31 Mei 2017

My Reason

Essay Topic
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The primary reason to get an education is to succeed financially
Support your response with reasons and examples

INTRODUCTION        :  I agree that the primary reason to get an education is to succeed financially
SUPPORTING PARAGRAPH 1:     for a better job opportunities
Examples             : Many companies today are opening job vacancies with minimum requirements bachelor degree or diploma and even a minimum magister for a particular position
Reason                 : Because with a minimum of bachelor degree or diploma education, prospective new employees are expected to have better knowledge and skills than those who do not
Personal Story   : I am currently studying in university hope that after graduation will get a good job as well as the appropriate salary like my brother who has become a civil servant because it has graduated bachelor degree
SUPPORTING PARAGRAPH 2 : for gain more knowledge and experience
Examples             : If I study more deeply then my skills will be more specific or by getting experience that many can train mentally to face hardness of world work later
Reason                 : Because with the knowledge and experience gained during education can be used for learning to be better
Personal story   : In addition to college I joined the banking lab as an assistant. There I learned the lesson of how to organization and experience of the seniors or graduates
CONCLUSION                    : getting a better job opportunities and gaining more knowledge and experience that result from studying  or education

INTRODUCTION 2

I know that education is very important. With the education of our way of thinking increasing. Because in education we get a lot of knowledge and certain skills. The higher the level of education a person is getting a lot of science in the can as well as a valuable experience which can lead us to a better direction.  With higher education we can get the job we want even amount of salary in accordance with our desire.